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Well a couple of things right off to did right. You got eye level and nailed the eyes. I think a nit pik would be for it to be wider at the bottom, nice shot.......
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
This is a great shot! It would have been nice to have gone a little wider as the others stated, but I really like this one anyway. Super sharp eyes, great catchlights reflecting from them, lovely depth of field, and the position of the hands and open mouth add a lot to this capture.
Nice catch. u got in really close and the dof and the pose are nice. I agree a tiny bit wider from the bottom and the tail could've improved this shot, but a nice shot nevertheless.
Liban
"There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela
Thanks everyone. After my flower shots, your kind words come at a good time! This is right out of the camera and unfortunately my aim was off. Try, try, try again...
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Paula
Your editing is welcomed. A picture is worth...
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Great catch! Feels good when you're trying hard to follow the advice and it comes together, doesn't it? - TF
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.