Attempt at light writing

[Dzerzhinski46]

Dear All,

After being inspired by a post on the Veiwfinder forum I decided to try my hand at light writing. Taken with a Canon A 80. 15sec. f8, various film speeds.

Thoughts and comments welcome.

Dzerzhinski

[SmartWombat]

The third photo has it, definitely the best of the bunch for me.

The first I feel is overexposed, and the double body image is distracting.
A single body like the last one would be better for me, or a lot of bodies.
I can't put my finger on why two is too many and not enough, strange.

The second, there isn't any body, just a few streaks of light. Not an interesting enough pattern to the light, or for me, enough of it.

That third picture looks like it could be, maybe a poster for modern dance?
Movement from the light trails, yet what appears a shadowy still body image.

[Young Shooter]

Very cool picture, here is one i tried once a long time ago
I didnt have a tri-pod so i just laid it in the street

[Steph_B]

Your third pic is really neat. Why don't you post it in the Art section of PR? It definitely belongs there! Great work.


Thanks for the inspiration.

CHeers,

Steph.

[Dzerzhinski46]

Dear All,

Thanks for all the replys. I enjoy the input very much.

I wasn't sure my pictures qualified as art to tell the truth, but then again, who am I to judge?

Dzerzhinski