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    The Atrium

    Here is a second picture from Toronto. I thought that the architecture was interesting.

    28mm 1/60sec f/9 ISO 200

    Please criticise.

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    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:48 PM.

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    Great shot.

    Well-framed, sharp and some nice movement / secondary subjects within the architecture you've captured. Nice color accents too with the little yellow escaltor strip, etc. The color might be a tad flat in spots but it works in this environment IMO. You could always bump the curve a bit but you don't need to necessarily.
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    Hi Seb,
    I like the shot very much. It is well-planned and composed.
    All the best.
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    Didn't waste you time.....

    Quote Originally Posted by Seb
    Here is a second picture from Toronto. I thought that the architecture was interesting.

    28mm 1/60sec f/9 ISO 200

    Please criticise.

    Seb
    You sure didn't waste your time in Toronto. This is another very well composed and thoughout image. Beautiful flow of lines and symmetry. Great placement of elements (ie the man at the top of the escalator). Even the bald head which I know you couldn't plan works great in this refective image. Simply put a very fine image one to be proud of. Thanks for sharing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Seb
    Here is a second picture from Toronto. I thought that the architecture was interesting.

    28mm 1/60sec f/9 ISO 200

    Please criticise.

    Seb
    Very nice formal shot. Nice to have the people scattered to break up the strong symmetry somewhat.
    Do you have a similar one taken maybe 8 feet to the left or near the bottom of one of those columns?

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    Hey guys,

    Thank you all for the great comments! Honnestly, I did not expected that kind of reaction toward this specific image.

    Here is another one which I guess meet Chunk demand. Actually, I wouldn't have posted it all alone because I don't really like the exposition and I was unable to rework it the way I wanted in Photoshop but still, here it is. The building inside the atrium was built at the end of the 19th century. It has an obvious value so the towers that were built there much later were built over the old building to preserve it.

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    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:48 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Seb
    Hey guys,

    Thank you all for the great comments! Honnestly, I did not expected that kind of reaction toward this specific image.

    Here is another one which I guess meet Chunk demand. Actually, I wouldn't have posted it all alone because I don't really like the exposition and I was unable to rework it the way I wanted in Photoshop but still, here it is. The building inside the atrium was built at the end of the 19th century. It has an obvious value so the towers that were built there much later were built over the old building to preserve it.

    Seb
    Thanks Seb - that is one great space.

    Please don't interpret anything I might ask or suggest on this forum to be a demand.

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