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    Artifical Flowers in Salisbury House

    at lunch with my Kodak pal
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    Re: Artifical Flowers in Salisbury House

    I like the light on this one a lot, Don, except for the window blinds. Not sure if it would be too close a crop if you cropped them out but think it would work, especially if you took a little off the top and bottom too.
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    Re: Artifical Flowers in Salisbury House

    That is a great idea. I too would probably crop something off the top. I would also like to see it in B&W as you have a nice range of tones here.

    I do like the window as it gives a sense of place however I wish that whatever that shelf like thing is on the bottom right wasn't there.
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    Re: Artifical Flowers in Salisbury House

    Hey... adding to what has been said... there is that piece of wood on the right side...vertical center that is distracting... and the tilt of the photo makes me a bit uneasy!!!

    Otherwise though... the colors and light are right on!!!

    Hope this helps,

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    Re: Artifical Flowers in Salisbury House

    Nice lighting Don..hope your lunch went well.
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    Re: Artifical Flowers in Salisbury House

    Thanks guys. Lunch at Salisbury House is always good.

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