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Thread: Around the Yard

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    Around the Yard

    What do you think?



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    Re: Around the Yard

    Quote Originally Posted by xsport652
    What do you think?
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    Hello,

    I think that there is a significant lighting issue in the first one. Your composition is ok and the dof seems good but the shot is way too muted. It could be sharper too. I think that you could improve it by a significant margin in post-processing by playing with levels or curves.

    The two others looks great to me. The yellow flower is quite striking. I am not sure how you did your lighting but it is very moody. Great work!

    As for the last one, I like the tight dof and the flashy colors of the sprinkler. I first thought that background was quite dark but then, I believe that it is appropriate as it allows to put a strong emphasis on your subject.

    Seb

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