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    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
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    architecture is looking up

    Only works with these in the right order ... if it works at all.
    Opinions?
    Is it worth printing and matting these two together ?
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    Re: architecture is looking up

    I really like the first one a lot. And there is probably nothing wrong with the second one. I just feel like I'd like it more if it were a little brighter. Although, this is likely how you intended it to look since there is so much light coming from the back window. I feel like I almost missed/looked right past the person looking up at the ceiling because I couldn't see her.
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    Re: architecture is looking up

    I like the concept alot here. i think both pics are good but would like to see you recover a bit more highlight in the second as well as bring out more shadow detail. Get the subject looking up to be a little more prominent, without losing the good indoor, natural lighting mood.
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    Re: architecture is looking up

    How about this edit ?
    Brought out a little more in the window, and a some shadow detail in Cheryl.
    How about the flip on the dome?
    I thought the lighter part at the top fitted the other image better...
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    Re: architecture is looking up

    That does look good. I really like the shot of the ceiling!
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