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Thread: Apple Burst

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    Apple Burst

    Maybe you can tell the weather sucked here this weekend ...so, I had to play with the apples in the kitchen ...trying out this new concept (to me anyway) - ICM - Intentional Camera Motion ...I think it has some potential for some day ...
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    Re: Apple Burst

    Lew - I think it works quite well, but I really don't care for the background, esp the vertical thing and the way it distracts from your cool fruit zoom! When I scroll the image so that the upper 2/5 is cut out, it just seems so much cleaner. Nice idea.

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    Re: Apple Burst

    G - good catch...I like it that way. Thanks.

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    Re: Apple Burst

    Works well, but I agree about the vertical in the bg. The streaks (utensils?) look like electric bolts and the apples are still fairly recognizable.

    interesting and pretty nice result
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