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Thread: Anxiety

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    Anxiety

    How do you people feel about this image? Critiques are welcomed, as always. =)
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    Re: Anxiety

    I like it, and your title is perfect for the mood this shot creates. The grain is a very nice touch! Nice work.
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    Re: Anxiety

    I'm with Michael, with one exception. I don't like the clothes at the subjects feet I find it a bit distracting.
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    Re: Anxiety

    Hi,
    I think the image is interesting, but it doesn't give me the feeling of "anxiety". You could have also had a tittle of "home late from work", or "drank too much", or ...

    If this is a project, it is a good start. But I'd do more. Just a few suggestions.... Since this is a posed shot, I'd work on the setting more. It currently looks like just a common door into a bathroom. Tweak it out; add uncommon elements; choose a more abstract camera angle; add things that would make one anxious; are there other things that can be done with the lighting?; etc.

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