Much improved Imho. The grapes are sharper though they seem a tad beat up (perhaps they're ready for harvest). The leaves at the top are a little dead too. I would crop a little off the left and still get a lot closer to the grapes. I also think the color could be warmer also. If you can't shoot at sunrise or sunset, try a warming filter or effect.

Agreed on the basics. HDR is an advanced technique that can wait. What you will find though is that it's a lot easier than it looks providing you have the right software.

Are these concord grapes? I miss those things

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