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Thread: another test

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    another test

    Hi again:
    it's me with the same picture but this time different size, let's see.
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    Re: another test

    If you want a critique of it, I have to say the clouds are fine except washed out in lower right. Where are the clouds? Where were you? Clouds are pretty but in a photograph they really need something for context. Some foreground objects.
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    Re: another test

    I would concur with what Frog has already added. I have seen cases where there's a unique cloud formation that stood out and offered a stronger subject. In this case, you have clouds across the entire image without any real focal point. The colors are nice. I'd be inclined to hold onto this in case you need some nice clouds to photoshop into an image.

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    Re: another test

    Hi frog and PC: I was in my balcony, the picture was taken through a mesh screen, I could have included the rooftop of the building in front of me but I chose not to, will keep in mind next time.
    Finally I figured out how to resize thanks to a post in the help forum and an e-mail from Gary, that Irfanview program is very easy to use.

    Julian

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    Re: another test

    I would add some contrast to the photo. I lean towards the right side with its warmth, even though you can tell its starting to catch some flare.

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