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    Another sunrise...

    Practice, practice, practice...

    What would improve the composition (or anything else, of course)? A vertical with just the LH and sun?





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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Terry, I really like this shot as it is, but it feels like the LH has an ever so slight lean to the right. Maybe I am just imagining that, but you might check it to verify.
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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Excellent image Terry. I find myself wanting the lighthouse a little more to the left, and further from the sun. Everything else as is. No other nitpicks, love it! I especially like the glowing reflection of the sun on the water.
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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Terry I like it. The deep saturation, detail in the sky, the birds all make for a beautiful shot. I think straightening the the lighthouse is all I can see. An easy fix.
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    Re: Another sunrise...

    The water is level but the LH is vertical??? How would you fix this? (I'll also ask on the PP forum.)

    Also, here is a cropped view.




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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Very powerful image. I see that the light house is either slightly leaning to the right (like Piza), or your lens is giving you a hard time. I don't know how to fix it ... grrrrr. Bet there's a way though.

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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Looks like a wide-angle shot with the lens tilted "back" just enough to produce a little keystoning of the LH. A little PP wizardry can fix. Cheaper than buying a PC/Tilt-Shift lens. Great sky conditions. Nice, sharp birds. Wish I'd been in your shoes at the time.

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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Incredible. Love the original as is. Very beautiful colours also. I wouldn't change a thing.
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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Quote Originally Posted by nikon19804 View Post
    Looks like a wide-angle shot with the lens tilted "back" just enough to produce a little keystoning of the LH. A little PP wizardry can fix. Cheaper than buying a PC/Tilt-Shift lens. Great sky conditions. Nice, sharp birds. Wish I'd been in your shoes at the time.
    Shot at 330mm.

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    Re: Another sunrise...

    WOW! really like it !

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    Re: Another sunrise...

    I don't see a problem with the leaning. Keep it as shot. If I were to crop, I would try to keep the bird that is just to the left of the other tower.

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    Re: Another sunrise...

    Thanks all. I've been trying various methods of 'straightening' the LH. I can't even really decide if it's actually leaning. - Terry
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    Re: Another sunrise...

    I definitely think it's leaning. It's one of those thing when, when you notice it, you can't see anything else!

    Maybe it's an optical illusion? Either way, it's an extremely attractive image.

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