Another Side Of Stone Mountain

[arne saknussen]

I would like to know how to improve my PP shot. Here is the SOOC:



And here is the PP shot.



One point I know, it needs a boat or something in the water on the right side, its off balance.

What else?

[n8]

Firstly, mask out whatever you did to the sky. The right side looks like an oil spill. I think the rest seems a bit oversaturated. A b/w conversion may be nice.

[arne saknussen]

Thanks N8, I thought I had taken care of that part of the sky, but I can plainly see now that I did not.

[LeeIs]

i think it's a bit grey when it comes to contrast. so a bit of contrast might help. also i agree with n8, i perfer the sky in the original. much smoother.