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    Another (peace lily)


    I don't know how to make it smaller, sorry .

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    Re: Another (peace lily)

    Alot better than your first one. Looks a little more sharp, and the DOF is alot better. You can use any image editing program (including MS Paint) to resize photos!

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    Re: Another (peace lily)

    While I like the overall form of the flower, I find the top out of focus section to be a distraction.I think a crop, something like this, starting where the flower is in good focus is a stronger shot within the original. I also think you could warm those cool tones a bit.
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    Re: Another (peace lily)

    Quote Originally Posted by Chunk
    While I like the overall form of the flower, I find the top out of focus section to be a distraction.I think a crop, something like this, starting where the flower is in good focus is a stronger shot within the original. I also think you could warm those cool tones a bit.
    Thanks, Chunk. I will play with it and repost. I thought about it some , and found that i like the way this shot fades to black, so I think it would be worth some playing with.

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