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Thread: Another Flower

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    Another Flower

    Hello Forum

    Here is a flower shot that I took with my point and shoot camera. My Nikon P5100 can focus very close for macro shots. Here is an image that I feel gives it credit. What do you think? Please critique.
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    Re: Another Flower

    wow thats nice

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    Re: Another Flower

    Thanks. I really think so.
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    Re: Another Flower

    Nice shape and color to this image, good composition too. I do wish you had pointed the camera just a tad more to the left so that deadhead in the center left and the bud at the bottom left weren't cut off by the edge of the frame.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Another Flower

    The flower itself is sharp and appears to be well exposed. Somehow I feel there's a color cast though. Also, I think the flower can use a better background. Right now it looks messy. The bottom left hand corner part of the photo seems out of line with the rest of the background. It it were mine, I would blur and darken the background. The positioning of the bud could be better, too.

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    Re: Another Flower

    Thanks for your comments.

    MB1: I know what you mean about the bud being cutt off. I will be more careful next time. When I am using the point and shoot camera sometimes I get careless.

    AgingEyes: I will try your suggestions and see what happens.
    Jorge I Rodriguez

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