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    Another different one

    Let 'er rip. What do you think of this one?

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    Re: Another different one

    I can't stop looking at this image, and I don't know why. I guess that's a good thing, although I'm not sure I like it. I find myself thinking that the ceiling by itself could make a wonderful subject, and the same with the light fixture. Put them both together, and I want to see more of them as individuals.

    I do like the way it's composed with the lines in the ceiling running at opposite angles, and I like how you lined up the figure so the widest points land on the support beams for the ceiling.

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    Re: Another different one

    the rambling makes sense, and I agree

    I like the tones here. Very cool abstract.

    Crazy shot, mesmerizing.
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    Re: Another different one

    I wonder what it would look like lit up? It might show some great textures in the wood?
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    Re: Another different one

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr Yuck
    the rambling makes sense, and I agree

    I like the tones here. Very cool abstract.

    Crazy shot, mesmerizing.
    Lights would be very cool. Wow.That lamp is a powerful subject.I keep looking, looking....
    Well done!









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    Re: Another different one

    It's OK but I think I'd do something more creative with a crop. It's just too straightforward as is. Also, if it were a little darker and the lights appeared to be glowing I think it would be a stronger shot.
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