Another Cactus and Sunset

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  • 06-17-2007, 04:20 PM
    GB1
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    Another Cactus and Sunset
    Shot out in Tucson AZ. At first I was thinking the sky was too hazy, but not sure... What do you think?

    Kodachrome 64
  • 06-17-2007, 04:27 PM
    Xia_Ke
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    I like this one GB. Love the sky. Two little things. I might have pulled back just a hair on this to add a tad more foreground and move the horizon up a bit. Also, I find my eyes keep drifting to the far right cactus. Both very minor things. Overall I really like this shot. Well done :)
  • 06-17-2007, 05:05 PM
    GB1
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    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Aaron - It might be a tad bit tight. It is actually a vertical format shot but the foreground was pitch black hence pretty much dead space.

    I did try cropping that right side cactus, it reduces down to pretty much just the cactus.. Not sure about that - what do you think here? It might be better
  • 06-17-2007, 05:14 PM
    Xia_Ke
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Much better GB. No tendency to wander at all. Now that I look at it with the crop done, I take back my suggestion for stepping back a hair too. Very nice shot. Frame that one and stick it on the wall:thumbsup:
  • 06-17-2007, 05:34 PM
    PrevailingConditions
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    GB,

    I agree with Aaron on the crop - much better than the wider version. Nice shot.

    PC
  • 06-17-2007, 06:16 PM
    GB1
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Thks guys - I see what you mean. Funny how one little subtraction can make a difference.
    GB
  • 06-17-2007, 06:26 PM
    Xia_Ke
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    I'm happy I finally got a chance to help you in return for the immense amount of help you have given me ;)
  • 06-17-2007, 06:53 PM
    afdlips
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    the haze doesnt bother me. this is a very strong image. I love how the silhouette stands so strong against the sky. great shot.
  • 06-18-2007, 12:46 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Nice work, GB1. The cropped version is surely stronger. Great looking sky, and strong silhouettes. this is a very good image.
    Great work
  • 06-18-2007, 04:08 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Congats on the feature GB1, I agree with all that has been posted. This could be in a travel magazine. Nice work.......
    Also I second the statement thanks for the help you have given me as well.
  • 06-18-2007, 05:53 AM
    swmdrayfan
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    GB, I'm with Greg. This has 'Arizona Highways' written all over it!
    Congratulations on the sticky. Definately well deserved.
    John
  • 06-18-2007, 06:39 AM
    CLKunst
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Sweet shot GB! It's so blue for a sunset, I think that's what I really like most about this one. The sky is mesmerizing here and I think the filtering of light through the clouds is what really makes this shot. I could go either way with the crop suggestions, although the trimmed one does look a bit neater to me I suspect that's due to frame/ratio comfort. The cactus is a lovely foreground element. Well deserved for the sticky this week.
  • 06-18-2007, 08:45 AM
    MonkeyWrench
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Congrats on the feature. Very nice shot, as others have already said great silhouette.
  • 06-18-2007, 08:46 AM
    GB1
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Thanks everyone - my first sticky! Looks like even the small things like a single item on the outer edge can really make a difference. I guess one of the tricks here might be to take the pic the best you can, and then cut, cut and cut (something I've heard about technical writing, too).

    Gb
  • 06-18-2007, 06:44 PM
    Frog
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Very nice, though I'll be different and say I like the first better. Seems to have more balance or something.
  • 06-18-2007, 09:27 PM
    GB1
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    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Frog - I can see where you might say that, for the main cactus is so dominant. Here's the original btw

    Gb
  • 06-19-2007, 01:38 PM
    Coastal Flyer
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    GB,

    Nicely done and congratulations on the Sticky. From a fellow San Diegian and traveler of the great southwest, you have captured the image so well. The desert is so forbidding yet dramatically fragile.

    Great job!

    CF
  • 06-19-2007, 07:12 PM
    GB1
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Thks CF - You going out there this summer? I'd like to do some camping and night photography, but sleeping in that heat's the problem.
  • 06-21-2007, 08:04 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    GB1, once again, great looking shot. One note as i look at this more. I would suggest cropping everything as you have but keep the Cactus a bit further away from the left edge.
  • 06-24-2007, 05:53 PM
    GB1
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    Re: Another Cactus and Sunset
    Gary - How about this one?