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    Ahead of Their Time

    Another one for y'all. =) My little brother - along with the majority of of my friends, as well as myself - dance, so finding an athletic model is never a hard task. This is probably the best picture out of the series.

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    Re: Ahead of Their Time

    Quote Originally Posted by thecynicroute
    Another one for y'all. =) My little brother - along with the majority of of my friends, as well as myself - dance, so finding an athletic model is never a hard task. This is probably the best picture out of the series.
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    I love everything about this except the tilt that hurts the scene as I see it.
    The tones and your exposure are especially spot on. A great capture, I'd simply rotate it.

    Seb

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    Re: Ahead of Their Time

    I agree with Seb. The exposure and the composition is wonderful. Just rotate the image so the ground at the window line of the closet building is level.

    James

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    Re: Ahead of Their Time

    wow awesome picture. how did you take it?

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    Re: Ahead of Their Time

    Very nice photo; creative, exposier is great with a nice background, the City of San Jose City Hall I believe.

    Nice job!

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    :yikes:

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    Re: Ahead of Their Time

    Thanks guys. =) Seb, I really couldn't do anything with the tilting. I had the camera on a tripod and I'm sure I had it horizontal when I took it. I can only blame it on the the wide angle view; as you could see, my subject, as well as the foreground, are not tilted. Thanks for the responses!

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    Re: Ahead of Their Time

    Quote Originally Posted by thecynicroute
    Thanks guys. =) Seb, I really couldn't do anything with the tilting. I had the camera on a tripod and I'm sure I had it horizontal when I took it. I can only blame it on the the wide angle view; as you could see, my subject, as well as the foreground, are not tilted. Thanks for the responses!
    Actually, you are right! I failed to notice that the foreground was straight. Then, it means that your camera wasn't parallel to the ground in the vertical axis, which create significant distortion with a wide angle. Hopefully, this can be worked in post processing.

    Seb

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