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    Ah, summer baseball...

    This picture reminds me of the best time of the year, baseball season! I took this last year:


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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    I like how there is a little something different about each butt....lol
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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    nice shot but toooooo much sky. I wonder if you would antique it a little give it a little old school look
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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    Not a bad shot at all.

    Yeah, there is a lot of sky here: perhaps zooming in on the three a little tighter. I like the two left fellows' stanches, looks very 'baseball.'

    Color wise, I don't know what type of camera you used or the color space, but there's something a bit off about the shot. It seems that the colors are all 'perfect', or straight out of the tube so to speak. There doesn't seem to be any graduated colors at all. It could be the contrast -- you can tell there's quite a bit because they whites are blown out on their uniforms. Perhaps it was too bright that day.....

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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Not a bad shot at all.

    Yeah, there is a lot of sky here: perhaps zooming in on the three a little tighter. I like the two left fellows' stanches, looks very 'baseball.'

    Color wise, I don't know what type of camera you used or the color space, but there's something a bit off about the shot. It seems that the colors are all 'perfect', or straight out of the tube so to speak. There doesn't seem to be any graduated colors at all. It could be the contrast -- you can tell there's quite a bit because they whites are blown out on their uniforms. Perhaps it was too bright that day.....

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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    Benguk - We're not normally supposed to edit another person's shot w/o permission, but I figured this might be the best way to show another angle.. hope you don't mind!?

    Maybe a tighter crop and conversion to b&w, which usually works for Baseball.
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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Benguk - We're not normally supposed to edit another person's shot w/o permission, but I figured this might be the best way to show another angle.. hope you don't mind!?

    Maybe a tighter crop and conversion to b&w, which usually works for Baseball.
    Hey no problem, that looks great!

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    Re: Ah, summer baseball...

    I like the b&w and the crop, but is it just me or is the horizon way crooked?

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