Admist the Tracks

[Has He Lost His Mind?]

afdlips and I went out for a shoot around our neighborhood, and this is one of many shots. Color corrected, original is RAW.

More to come.

Don't be afraid to cut me down, and you can edit my pictures.

[Has He Lost His Mind?]

Another one:

[Loupey]

It's difficult to offer you a critique because I'm not understanding the story you're trying to convey here.

Of the two, I like the second one from the standpoint that it is not as distorted. But other than that, they are not speaking to me. What were they saying to you?

[Has He Lost His Mind?]

I was trying to take a picture without any obstruction of the "modern life." This is one of the oldest buildings in Broomfield, where it's a city in a constant state of suburban renewal.

[Greg McCary]

I agree with Loupey, I think composition wise with the angles you used and the framing they are fine. I just think you need more interesting subjects. I like the second one best because of the graffiti.
Greg