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    abandoned papermill






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    Re: abandoned papermill

    Interesting photo series. I like the last images best. All the other have potential but need to be croped. They seem too busy to me.

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    Re: abandoned papermill

    Yep, the last one works very nicely. Agree on the cropping of the rest, especially the second one. Take a little off the top and you've got a good one. I notice some small lens flare in the shot of the water? tower. Not that it's a bad thing.

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    Re: abandoned papermill

    I too like the last one, the other two the composition is way out there.

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    Re: abandoned papermill

    Quote Originally Posted by swmdrayfan
    I notice some small lens flare in the shot of the water tower. Not that it's a bad thing.
    Yeah, I like to call that thing the sun. :P

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    Re: abandoned papermill

    HLCYG - Great place for shots. A lot of potential. I shot a model in a place like this a few weeks ago.. Food for thought for you

    They're mostly documentary type shots but I think you can make it into anything you wanted - you could scout out fine art, devistation, etc themes here. The possibilities are endless.

    I like the shot of the fellow in the Army shirt. Matter of fact, this whole place would be an excellant urgan warfare training area for the US Army. A lot of these conditions in Iraq.

    Anyway, would be nice to do at least a little bit compression on those Jpgs... they're on the order of 600KB . Ouch!
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