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    Somethings wrong with this one...it doesn't look overly mapped! It's rather busy, but it's a nice change of pace for what you usually post.
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    The stems are a bit messy, but I hesitate to bland them because of the texture on the pot.

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    A really unique shot in the flower genre. The brown of the pot and the orange of the buds is very striking. And the white flowers are in a great position. Awesome composition.

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    I think it's a pleasing image overall. Very unconventional and quite busy. It's a tad too yellow also.
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    Your choice of a title got me to open this one.

    I like it big like this and the multiple planes work. I think the left side of the image to the point on the right where the branches end is great. The issue I have what appear to be reflections in a metallic vase, and the blue sky poking through, both of which are too distracting and busy.

    Maybe you can work a crop on this one. The left side is worth it IMO.

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    I will give the crop some thought.

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    I think you should crop some from the bottom some from the right. Maybe darken the BG, not much, and clean it up by cloning the white/lighter and blue areas below the flowers. I am diggin the color treatment though.
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    Reworked from critique, but it is a total rework, so it may not have fully addressed the issues.

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