That 70's look

[starriderrick]

Early 70's architecture. One of the 17 buildings at Loral Space Systems in Palo Alto,ca.
I wasn't sure what to do about the sky.It was bright overcast.
Here it is unedited....
Suggestions would be appreciated. I'm here to learn.
Rick

[ZL4life]

i'm not sure what you were going for, but I don't think that this shows enough of the architecture to get the job done.

[MonkeyWrench]

The sky doesn't bother me that much. I like the blue and yellow contrast and lines. I agree I would like to see more of the building. You might try and see if you could get the window reflection to work for you.

[MarcusK]

Hey Rick,

Well for one, the tilt needs to be fixed... i find straight architecture works best, unless the tilting is intentional.

Also I would agree with ZL4life, it is not clear what you were going for.. the building of course, but what about it?

I think a different attempt at it would be nice if you could...

Hope this helps