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    7 Up

    Just a little experimentation...the "seventh" was not in the shot. A Clone... Your thoughts.

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    Re: 7 Up

    I saw this one in the gallery. Wonderful lighting and composition. It leads the eye through the shot and the color treatment works very well. You might think about cloning the small bushes as well but very good as is.
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    Re: 7 Up

    Good title and execution.
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    Re: 7 Up

    Is it a slight green tint to the photo? I'm not nit-picking it, just trying to pick up what it actually is.

    The seventh does look a little out of place. The verticals on the seventh don't seem natural, and the lack of light falling around the base of it certainly gives it away.
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    Re: 7 Up

    Not sure why you tried to clone another one in there. It's not spaced evenly like the others, there's no light falling from it on the ground (which is what "makes" the rest of the shot, IMO), and the light actually looks square-ish and choppy.
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    Re: 7 Up

    I like it well enough but want more space at the top of the frame and less at the bottom.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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