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Thread: 6 Up

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    6 Up

    Thanks for all the great tips, feedback on "7 Up" Here we go...again. Utilizing ALL the advice.

    Rick
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    Re: 6 Up

    I do like the top down viewpoint here.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: 6 Up

    Wow, nobody's commented on this? I think this image is fantastic.
    1) This image has a real "3d" feel because of the perspective and deep DOF (although usually this makes for the opposite effect).
    2) The light decay is nice, resulting in smooth shadows that melt right into the darkness.
    3) The composition results in a delightful separation of light and dark by sections of the image, but still fuse when viewed as a whole.

    Only concern are the street lights at the top. Clone those out maybe.
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    Re: 6 Up

    Yeah this is great. The perspective makes the shot interesting and the composition leads the eyes into and through the image. Nicely done.

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