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I like them but they are so small that it is difficult to catch the details. Maybe crop them down so there isnt so much of the backround on top, i dont think it adds to the picture.
Army
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Archer, the composition is ok but everything is so new and plastic. Seems a bit bright to me and if you dropped the exposure a bit and maybe bumped the shadows there would be more detail. I think it needs a bottle of beer or a cigar or something in there too.
I would have shot them from directly above. The angle you have here adds depth, but I don't feel that it really helps the photo,.. probably hurts it a bit, seeing the cloth ripples. The cards seem a tad too bright (on this monitor), and not sure I like the space at the top.
Not a bad idea by any means, just needs a different composition.
Gb
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When you take these sort of photo's you need to watch the whites, these seem to be blown so a different exposure required for the whites.
Nice attempt, but I agree that there is too much space above the chips. crop this down by half.
As for the crumpled look of the cloth I have no problems with the angle as it does give it some depth.
Roger
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Keep working at it .. tabletop photography is a matter, I'm afraid, of keep shooting it, check it onthe computer, shoot it again, and so on, until you get it right.
Keep working at it .. tabletop photography is a matter, I'm afraid, of keep shooting it, check it onthe computer, shoot it again, and so on, until you get it right.
Cheers
Mike
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Roger
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
My Web Site: www.readingr.com DSLR
Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro Digital
Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100