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    3 winter pictures

    Hi

    How do you like these 3 winter pictures? They were taken in the park nearby my house
    2 years ago. Write SINCERELY!!! Judge them in the scale from 1(hopeless) to 10 (excellent).
    If you can pinpoint what is wrong/should be improved inside them - let me know please

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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    I don't like judgeing on scales, but..The first one is the better of the three. I think panning slightly right and putting the tree in the left third of the shot would have made it better. On the second one I like how the limbs all flow to the right but the object in the lower left needs to be cropped or cloned out. And on the last I would have cropped in and got rid of the tree on the right. You placed your horizon well on them all, nice and level. To me the snow looks a touch green as well, could be my monitor but you can adjust that easy enough. You also picked a very nice time of day to shoot and the light coming through he trees is very nice. On a scale from 1 to 10... 8 on subject matter, 6 on composition, 6 on processing, 10 on exposure, 10 on becoming a PR member and posting these shots. Thanks for sharing and welcome aboard.
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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    Thanks for your comment. I am waiting for the next . The tree on the first picture isn't our native. It comes from Canada as I remember well. It is a palace garden where it grows

    Soon more pictures of mine

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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    I like the first one. I think if it had a rabbit or another animal,it would have brought life into it...
    As for the other two, they look to symmetrical for me. My attention is drawn to trees with no leaves or anything on them...

    Again the first, looks pretty good.
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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    The color balance looks off to me. The first and last photos look the best but there still missing something.
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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    They do look like old photos to me because of the greenish/yellow cast on them. Did you do it on purpose?

    Other than that, I don't see anything particularly wrong with them. Even with the color cast removed, I don't think I'd give them a 10 but neither would I give them a 1. Guess that makes me don't know what I'm talking about ;-)

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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    Hello

    Thanks noone gave me 1 point for my pictures (or zero).
    Truly speaking I would never ever admit such a judgement fair but who says judgments
    must be fair, hm? :hand:

    Yes - more animals... when I buy a rabbit one day I will shot it next to the tree, no doubt :thumbsup:

    green.

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    Re: 3 winter pictures

    ps. sorry - I will SHOOT the rabbit (I meant).

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