3 Bays, No Waiting

[xwingkiller]

here's something. =)

[MB1]

Good lighting and color. I think I want a little more of what should be at the bottom of the frame.

[gahspidy]

Very good, I agree a bit more of the bottom would help. Love the diagonal shadows. The bold colors of the bays against the earthy tones of the building set up well.
Good stuff

[Pyro37976]

Love the shadows, but I agree with MB1 - more at the bottom and less at the top may have been better (not sure how the rule of thirds would play out on this one).

[xwingkiller]

thanks a lot for commenting guys.
i know what you mean about the bottom because i had a hard time with the crop on this. the problem is that it's pretty much cut off right where it hits the ground. so anything below this spot adds in a brightly lit grey concrete with the yellow lane markers going off at odd angles.

[Overbeyond]

Very well seen. But I think the large diagonal shadow top right is a distraction. A little more contract would bring out the bottom shadows more stronger. Also I feel it is tight on the left side as I look.
Nevertheless I think this is very good.