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    2nd Floor waiting room

    A couple of shots of our 2nd floor waiting room at our Murphysboro office location.

    I like both shots the big one I was on the floor shooting up, the 2nd one of the refection off the table was in the back right hand part of the room. I wish I had closed the doors on that shot.

    Anyhow what you think? I still sem to have problems with focus tho seems like they are fuzzy?
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    Re: 2nd Floor waiting room

    I like the first one and the light though I think it could use more space at bottom and less on top. I agree it seems a bit fuzzy. What was your shutter speed...might have needed to use a tripod here if you didn't.
    The second one isn't doing it for me but maybe others. The chopped off ceiling light, the chopped railings(?) the door handles. Seems sharper than the first one though.
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    Re: 2nd Floor waiting room

    Setup on the first shot was 18mm f/3.5 at 1/50 and iso-200 aperture 3.6 with no flash. No tripod tho. I will try reshooting with a tripod and see if I can sharpen it up.

    I realy don't know why my focus sems to be off all the time. Oh well just need to keep at it. Or maybe I need new glass's again.

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    Re: 2nd Floor waiting room

    On top of what Frog has suggested if you shot RAW I think you should adjust the white balance on the first one and get rid of the yellow/orange tint and make it white like the second, but I echo Frog's critique.
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