Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 9 of 9
  1. #1
    wannabe
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    kansas city missouri
    Posts
    533

    1st studio shoot

    The subject is Travis Ferguson a Iowa State linebacker getting ready for the upcoming draft.
    so any suggestions ?
    D700
    85mm 1.8 D
    24-70 2.8 ED
    70-200 2.8 ED VRII
    2xSB900
    Elinchrom Ranger RX 1100watt heads.

    http://dustindraperphotography.com/

  2. #2
    GB1
    GB1 is offline
    Moderator GB1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    San Diego CA
    Posts
    9,960

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    I like your work here. Not crazy about how the elbow's cut off, but the exp density of his face etc is perfect. You captured his eyes ideally and hence succeeded quite well. Bravo.

    Ps - Funny how football ages the players so fast. This fellow looks older than 21 or 22......

    G
    Photography Software and Post Processing Forum Moderator. Visit here!

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Feel free to edit and repost my photos as part of your critique.
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    My Site

  3. #3
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    Agree with GB.

    Nice work. What was the lighting setup?

  4. #4
    wannabe
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    kansas city missouri
    Posts
    533

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    thanks guys . It was hard to get him all into the frame, after all all he is 6'4 250. I used my 70-200 2.8 about 20 feet away there were 2 alien bee 800's 1 large soft box on the right and on strobe for rim lighting with a reflector on the left. I did a supershoots workshop and was great. met the great DK , he shoot artistic and fetish nudes and JT as well.
    D700
    85mm 1.8 D
    24-70 2.8 ED
    70-200 2.8 ED VRII
    2xSB900
    Elinchrom Ranger RX 1100watt heads.

    http://dustindraperphotography.com/

  5. #5
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Oologah, Oklahoma
    Posts
    1,360

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    Nice work. I even like the elbow cut off and the resulting emphasis on his bicep. Great facial expression. Nothing to do with your photography -- but I hate all these tattoos that are so popular.
    ________________________
    Paula

    Your editing is welcomed. A picture is worth...


    All can look. Few will see. Less will know.

    The Truth can be anything it will. I just want to know Truth.

  6. #6
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    Thx for the info, race. Elbow or not, it's still a great shot. The lighting is really effective; I really like the glow on his face.

  7. #7
    Member DrRoebuck's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Posts
    381

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    The pose looks effeminate.
    "Photography as a fad is well-nigh on its last legs, thanks principally to the bicycle craze."

    -- Alfred Stieglitz
    The American Annual of Photography, 1897

    L.A. Landscapes

  8. #8
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    Well done. For a first time or a 1000's time, this is still good. Nice lighting. Yeah maybe the elbow shoulda been there, but it doesn't take away from the effectiveness, evenness, and the professional look of this shot.
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  9. #9
    A picture is a present you give yourself shootme's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Melbourne, Australia
    Posts
    2,676

    Re: 1st studio shoot

    1st studio shoot, well you nailed it in my opinion, well done. S
    :thumbsup: Shootme...

    Please don't edit and re-post or use my images (not that you'd want to anyway...). without my written permission. Thank you



Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •