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    1973

    the Events of 1973.... any suggestions


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    Re: 1973

    anyone? ill even take it completly sucks

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    Re: 1973

    mondo,
    It could be a really cool shot if the lighting wasn't so harsh. the reflection (from the flash?) on the spine of the books is very distracting. This same shot with a nice warm soft light could look really nice

    -Jeff

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    Re: 1973

    i'd like to see the books all the same size as well. but they arn't horrible as they are.
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    Re: 1973

    yes its from the flash, maybe ill try again to remove it, i think i can get the books the same ssize with a diffrent set i have, maybe ill try later most appericated,

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    Re: 1973

    I could use a lot more DOF.
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    Re: 1973

    I like the idea, but would try to focus on the 3rd or 4th book down.

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    Re: 1973

    DOF? i dont know what that is can anyone help me there?

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    Re: 1973

    DOF means deapth of field. they want a greater area of the photograph in focus.
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    Re: 1973

    Quote Originally Posted by Debaser
    I like the idea, but would try to focus on the 3rd or 4th book down.
    I second this idea. I can't read the spine on my screen at all but maybe that's just my screen.
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    Re: 1973

    I agree with the dof and lighting comments. If you hadn't told us what year it was, I never would have known.

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