1 room school@dusk

[mdmc]

Any comment welcome.
Mark.

[Overbeyond]

This is very nice little shot. The only slight problem I have is that the sky colour is too similar to the colour near the apex of the roof.
Tom

[Chunk]

The shot seems dark and depressing on my monitor. I like the compostion and think the color in the background would be nice if it was brighter overall.

[OldSchool]

Hi Mark,

I think you have a nice image here. I like the pastel like colors. I agree with Chunk that the image could be a little brighter.

BR,
Tim

[thecynicroute]

I think it would be nice if he went the other direction.. take away some saturation on the flowers and purposely make it a depressing picture. The clouds already make the room creepy.

[mdmc]

Thanks to all for replying. your suggestions have led to a much improved image.
Mark.

[Tuna]

I initially liked the darker feel of the first but the second does have better impact with the seperation of foreground and background through your adjustment.

Tuna

[Herriot]

Nicely framed and a great mixture of colours and the brightened version works far more for me, nice to see the forum suggestions leading to these kinds of results!

Herriot

[Aaron]

I too like the second version best, better contrast and this adds visual interest to me.

[CLKunst]

The difference is night and day. Beautifully adjusted. This really works!