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    Firefighter Tyson L. Sparks's Avatar
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    Look at the face of the driver real close. Did I do a good job or an injustice?

    The original,





    The retouch,

    How can I be lost
    If I've got nowhere to go?

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    Re: 1 or 2

    I don't know about anyone else, but I'd bet she'd be thrilled with it.
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    I think you did well. I vote yes.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: 1 or 2

    Tyson,

    You did a great job. She should be very pleased.

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    :yikes:

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    Re: 1 or 2

    You did fine as far as it went.

    The chin and throat could be subtly tweaked as well to improve not just the smoothness of the skin, but additional the throat profile . There's a small remnant at corner of the mouth that could be mistaken for a dimple, but I would do more work in that area. The nostril area of the nose needs a bit more work also to 'fit' with the rest of the touch up.

    One retouching concept to learn, is to always enhance the eyes. Even if it means enlarging them a small amount or 'opening' them up as it makes the face look more like people usually think they look.

    You got the idea, now its just practice, practice, practice.
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    Re: 1 or 2

    I like the candid moment of the spy photo.Nip / Tuck. :O) Good work.
    Is this an ambulance?

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    Yes it is our squad, we were at a 4th July fesivile.

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    If I've got nowhere to go?

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