Gary, Kelly's absolutely right. The edits you've made have improved and cleaned up some things, but have also added new problems. BTW, that's the nature of web design, too. Two steps forward and one back...
After the home page, there is too much text to read before you see another image. An easy (and hopefully obvious) solution to this problem is to simply have a gallery link on your home page, and have that go to a gallery menu page with a thumbnail for each seperate gallery showing one of the images from that gallery.
Doing this gives the viewer a quick glance at a sample of each of your gallery subjects, and it instantly reinforces what the name or label of the subject refers to visually.
Instead of taking "potshots" at your various gallery pages (which is what happens with just text links), they can instead make an easy choice based on what they find the most interesting.
If you want, you can add some of the text (maybe a short description) WITH the thumbnails, but even that should be kept to a minimum. Making the thumbnails link to the pages the way you have them now (with a few paragraphs of text) would not be as big a deal, and probably not a deadend for viewers. If they've seen the thumbs, they'll most likely have no problems making one more click to get to the pics...