ViewFinder Photography Forum

General discussion - our photography living room. Talk about aesthetics, philosophy, share your photos - get inspired by your peers! Moderated by another view and walterick.
ViewFinder Forum Guidelines >>
Introduce Yourself! >>
PhotographREVIEW.com Gatherings and Photo Field Trips >>
Results 1 to 10 of 10
  1. #1
    has-been... another view's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2003
    Location
    Rockford, IL
    Posts
    7,649

    Starved Rock State Park

    I went to Starved Rock State Park with Sebastian and his friend Kerry yesterday. It's an incredible place with canyons, waterfalls and lots of wildlife. Of course, we happened to get the one sunny day we've had in awhile (hoping for overcast), there very little snow over the winter (so not much for waterfalls) and the animals were probably taking a nap. At 64 degrees, it was a good day to be out.

    The second one is my first attempt at a duotone - thanks to Asylum Steve for an important tip here! What do you think of it? Both from the Fuji S2.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Starved Rock State Park-starvedrock.jpg   Starved Rock State Park-starvedrockbw810.jpg  

  2. #2
    Powder River Imaging EOSThree's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    Like no place on earth
    Posts
    1,327

    Starved Rock, I haven't been there for 20 years!

    I am an ex-Chicagoan, and remember many trips to Starved Rock in my youth. In College I went down there via back roads photographing old barns along the way. Matthieson State park is right down the road from Starved Rock and contains a few more sandstone canyons, one of which I remember having quite drop on it's mini waterfall. On your pictures, I just want to see a little more, I want to see where the water is coming from. Both of your shots leaves me a little frustrated, I want to look outside of the frame: up on the first one and to the left on the second one.
    Rule books are paper they will not cushion a sudden meeting of stone and metal. --Ernie Gann--
    What is a cynic? A man who knows the price of everything and the value of nothing. --Oscar Wilde--

  3. #3
    Sleep is optional Sebastian's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Chicago Suburbs
    Posts
    3,149
    Steve,

    I really like the first one, a very abstract view of the fall. The second one is good as well, you found good lines in that subject, something I could not do all day.

    I will post mine soon. I went to bed when I got home and woke up just now.
    Last edited by Sebastian; 03-21-2004 at 04:10 PM.
    -Seb

    My website

    (Please don't edit and repost my images without my permission. Thank you)

    How to tell the most experienced shooter in a group? They have the least amount of toys on them.

  4. #4
    Sleep is optional Sebastian's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Chicago Suburbs
    Posts
    3,149
    Out of sixty shots I liked three...either my avergae is getting down to abysmal levels, or I am getting way too critical. Oh well.

    I don't even like these too much...

    The first one, proabably my favorite, definitely not a typical waterfall shot. I don't know, I've been loking at nature in rather abstract ways lately.







    Thanks Steve and Kerry, I learned a lot from listening to both of you and watching you shoot. Nature is by far my weakest area, and it was exciting to see you guys work.
    -Seb

    My website

    (Please don't edit and repost my images without my permission. Thank you)

    How to tell the most experienced shooter in a group? They have the least amount of toys on them.

  5. #5
    Sleep is optional Sebastian's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Chicago Suburbs
    Posts
    3,149
    I lied...

    There's one more.

    -Seb

    My website

    (Please don't edit and repost my images without my permission. Thank you)

    How to tell the most experienced shooter in a group? They have the least amount of toys on them.

  6. #6
    don't tase me, bro! Asylum Steve's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    Location
    Middle Florida
    Posts
    3,667

    I know his shots are pretty decent, but GOD????

    Quote Originally Posted by Sebastian
    The second one is god as well...
    Ah, Sebastian. You're too easy a target when you'e not fully awake...

    Nice shots, guys...
    "Riding along on a carousel...tryin' to catch up to you..."

    -Steve
    Studio & Lighting - Photography As Art Forum Moderator

    Running the Photo Asylum, Asylum Steve's blogged brain pipes...
    www.stevenpaulhlavac.com
    www.photoasylum.com

  7. #7
    Sleep is optional Sebastian's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Chicago Suburbs
    Posts
    3,149
    Quote Originally Posted by Asylum Steve
    Ah, Sebastian. You're too easy a target when you'e not fully awake...

    Nice shots, guys...
    Grrr...

    It's fixed now. :P

    Oh, yeah, thanks...
    -Seb

    My website

    (Please don't edit and repost my images without my permission. Thank you)

    How to tell the most experienced shooter in a group? They have the least amount of toys on them.

  8. #8
    has-been... another view's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2003
    Location
    Rockford, IL
    Posts
    7,649
    Seb - What you said was interesting. It is a beautiful place and I have seen alot of great photographs from it - but now I've been there twice and both times I've had a hard time with it. I just don't "see" much compositionally. I think my 2 here are OK, but my others were pretty uninspired. The thing that saved the second shot was the duotone (or b&w) becuse the colors were so flat. I do like your third shot - the shutter speed is what works here for me.

  9. #9
    Sleep is optional Sebastian's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Chicago Suburbs
    Posts
    3,149
    Quote Originally Posted by another view
    Seb - What you said was interesting. It is a beautiful place and I have seen alot of great photographs from it - but now I've been there twice and both times I've had a hard time with it. I just don't "see" much compositionally. I think my 2 here are OK, but my others were pretty uninspired. The thing that saved the second shot was the duotone (or b&w) becuse the colors were so flat. I do like your third shot - the shutter speed is what works here for me.
    I hear ya.

    I feel the same way, it's a place that SHOULD be interesting to shoot, yet I have a really hard time with it for some reason. Maybe it was the lighting? Who knows...
    -Seb

    My website

    (Please don't edit and repost my images without my permission. Thank you)

    How to tell the most experienced shooter in a group? They have the least amount of toys on them.

  10. #10
    Just a Member Chunk's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2004
    Location
    Jefferson, WI, USA
    Posts
    3,351

    The leaves

    Quote Originally Posted by another view
    I went to Starved Rock State Park with Sebastian and his friend Kerry yesterday. It's an incredible place with canyons, waterfalls and lots of wildlife. Of course, we happened to get the one sunny day we've had in awhile (hoping for overcast), there very little snow over the winter (so not much for waterfalls) and the animals were probably taking a nap. At 64 degrees, it was a good day to be out.

    The second one is my first attempt at a duotone - thanks to Asylum Steve for an important tip here! What do you think of it? Both from the Fuji S2.
    I like the movement of the leaves in the pool in the second shot.

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •