Death In Fall

Another photoshoot with Emily as the model.

Location: Mill Pond, Milton, ON
Gear: Nikon D300 with AF-S Nikkor 70-200mm 1:2.8G VR
Strobe: SB-600 with either a Shoot Thru Umbrella or a Grid Snoot, triggered with Elinchrom Skyports

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These look pretty good to my non-pro eye.
I do notice a couple of things.
First one, I's like eyes that stand out better.
Second one, her hand and the rail it is on. I can't tell you what bothers me about it but it just doesn't look right. Perhaps because they are so close to frame and/or becasue they are so close in tone. Arm seems a bit washed out.
Third, same problem only with leaves. More contrast perhaps?
Fourth, just enough back ground that I want to know where she is but not enough to tell me.
Looks like she is working well with you and those are just things I notice. I'd like to find someone that would work so well with me as I'm too far in the boonies to know any models and couldn't afford one if I did.

Thanks Frog!

Yeah, I could have used a second light for these shots, just a learning experience for me :D Thanks for the critiques!