You know what I'd like to see?
Nat, these are pretty good. Mixing available and flash light in a subtle, delicate balance can be extremely tough...
Unfortunately, in a couple of the shots (the first and third most notably, a bit in the fourth) you have what's called a light overlap, where neither the flash nor the daylight is dominant, and, depending on your shutter speed, you tend to get a slight unsharpness or ghosting from subject or camera movement.
The good news it usually only takes a tweak of the exposure or flash setting to make things right, but that takes experimentation. Luckily, digital shooting makes evaluating these kinds of shots easier...
IMO, the best way to do these kinds of shots is to create seperate pics of the two light elements. IOW, figure out your exposure for the daylight and take a shot of that (without the flash). Then underexpose (or block) the available light, but make the flash the proper exposure, and take a shot of that.
When you compare the two images, it will be pretty easy to spot where the lighting will overlap. Then you can adjust and modify accordingly, sometimes blocking off ambient light, or perhaps repositioning the flash or dialing it down a tad.
I'm guessing you didn't do that, but if you did, it would be fun to see, and would probably help others interested in the same setup.
Re: You know what I'd like to see?
so are you saying find a middle ground between the two exposures to get the light more even....? Thanks for looking and siggesting as soon as I have a some time again I will try it....no sure when that wil be but will keep that in mind since taht will predominantly be the least expensive route right now...thanks ;)