• 03-09-2008, 04:44 AM
    livin4lax09
    NZ National Triathlon Championships
    enjoy, all.



    Moderator note: Images removed 12 March at Brent's request, as these will appear in a book.

    Good luck with the book Brent !
  • 03-09-2008, 05:19 AM
    Tiago Rohrsetzer
    Re: NZ National Triathlon Championships
    Very good job ..
    #1 and #2 are the best for me...
    congratulation :D
  • 03-09-2008, 07:45 AM
    SmartWombat
    Re: NZ National Triathlon Championships
    I like #1 too and particularly #3, nice use of the shadow of the runner.

    #4 is a good candidate for an essay on the day, but not so hot as a stand-alone image.
    It lacks the context of the race that it really can only get from being included in a series form the day.
  • 03-09-2008, 12:02 PM
    Old Timer
    Re: NZ National Triathlon Championships
    Nice to see a post from down under Brent. Love them all but the shadow runner is superb.
  • 03-09-2008, 04:06 PM
    livin4lax09
    Re: NZ National Triathlon Championships
    SW, you nailed it right on the head. This is for my photo practices class, where my subject is triathlon training and racing. We are doing a photo documentary. :)

    Thanks for the comments.
  • 03-10-2008, 03:10 PM
    SmartWombat
    Re: NZ National Triathlon Championships
    I reckon #3 could do with a crop from the bottom, the action is all in the top half.
    The angle of the runner puts the motion out of the frame in the top half.
    I don't think the road in the lower half adds much, if there was something there like a distance mark sprayed on the road it would be very different, but that empty grey tarmac doesn't do anything for me
    Maybe take 1/2 of the road (the bottom 1/4 image) out ?