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    Early Morning over the Inlet

    Took a few shots over the inlet on my early morning commute - did not see the ducks until I uploaded to pc later ...
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    and so castles made of sand melt into the sea ... eventually

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    I love the colour in here, but it begs for panoramic!
    The expanses at the top and bottom detract from the image as a whole. The mainfocus/subject is that wonderful curving boardwalk. Where is it I want to go there?
    I've done a quick crop and a bit of cloning to show what I mean.
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    Jon

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    Great crop - thanks for the advice - I'm relatively new in photography - I pride myself (though) in being able to recognize the moment that 'begs' for a pic to be taken ... - and the curvy boardwalk (just looking at it - even though I know exactly where it goes) sparked the same message for me - where does it go?? You have shared a new tecnique with me - panoramic - never really thought of it until now ... thx Phil

    Quote Originally Posted by JK_Photo
    I love the colour in here, but it begs for panoramic!
    The expanses at the top and bottom detract from the image as a whole. The mainfocus/subject is that wonderful curving boardwalk. Where is it I want to go there?
    I've done a quick crop and a bit of cloning to show what I mean.
    and so castles made of sand melt into the sea ... eventually

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    Oooooooooooooh. How blue is this?! Is this for real? I am on a laptop...never know what visual discombobulating fantasies you may receive there!

    As warm a fantasy as gold Gold is. (Sorry had to plug my current love.) This is the opposite spectrum appeal.

    Maybe I need to get out more. (Ha!) What a moody feeling I get here. I can't tell about the "ducks". I see some things in the water, maybe this is my visual, but who cares!? They look a bit odd, on my screen...but I'm not drawn to them.

    Ok, the lighting and moodiness is fabulous. I do like the crops...maybe not as extremely pan...but a little off the distracting tree branches...and this coming from the set against the dead center horizontal FRU!

    Keep em' coming!
    Ruh roh...Where am I?

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    Nice shot Philmony! And I also like he crop by JK. I wonder what it would look like with the other
    twigs and the stumps cloned out on this side of the walk.
    Oh well. I hope you don't mind.

    thanks,

    Scott
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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    Great job, I love the blue.

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    Hi BamaFru - Yup, that blue is for real - no touching up or play with white balance at all (shot on automatic white balance) - altho I did shoot 2 others white-balanced against grey - nice pics but it detracted from the mood - so it got cut

    I love your gold pic - def. a poster shot ... great work
    I have also (lately) done a bit of work with 'light' painting - not landscape stuff but just of various people (portraits) against deep colored backgrounds - as soon as I have an acceptable pic I will post it.

    Phil
    ps - the ducks only become distinct when looking at the pic full res. 2272 x 1704 - I guess thats why I missed em ;)

    Quote Originally Posted by BamaFru
    Oooooooooooooh. How blue is this?! Is this for real? I am on a laptop...never know what visual discombobulating fantasies you may receive there!

    As warm a fantasy as gold Gold is. (Sorry had to plug my current love.) This is the opposite spectrum appeal.

    Maybe I need to get out more. (Ha!) What a moody feeling I get here. I can't tell about the "ducks". I see some things in the water, maybe this is my visual, but who cares!? They look a bit odd, on my screen...but I'm not drawn to them.

    Ok, the lighting and moodiness is fabulous. I do like the crops...maybe not as extremely pan...but a little off the distracting tree branches...and this coming from the set against the dead center horizontal FRU!

    Keep em' coming!
    and so castles made of sand melt into the sea ... eventually

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    "I love your gold pic - def. a poster shot ... great work"

    Oh how I wish I could call that my own! Alas it belongs to JK.

    Anyway, keep em coming!
    Ruh roh...Where am I?

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    Re: Early Morning over the Inlet

    I really like the blue color here. As far cropping and cloning, ShotsbyScott has my vote. Congratulations on being there at the right time.

    Dudley

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