At a Pool

[nonggame]

I just want te hear some opinions on this image. What should be improved or what is good?

[Tyson L. Sparks]

I thin I would cool it down just a little. Has a retro look to it to me. But not too bad.

[Lava Lamp]

Welcome to the site. Please post more and comment upon some of the other photos, as well.

You have 41 views on this and no comments. That probably means folks are having trouble connecting. Maybe if the girl on the board was turned toward the camera that would help.

[Frog]

What's up with the color?
I think it is too busy . I don't know if the girl or the slide is the subject.
Sorry, it isn't working for me.

[Alexandre da Veiga]

The WB is "wrong", but, for some reason, I like it.

I am not feeling the composition, everything is crammed together(slide, girl, trees and other people), then you have two fairly big spaces(pool and sky), and you cut the lifeguard and the man on the right.

For improvement?
Pay attention to everything and control your frame. Try to isolate the subject(s), where do you want us to look at?
Check the rule of thirds and the golden rectangle.

[nonggame]

I meant to adjust to wb to that color, just want to try something new. Also, would a crop help? I've done a quick edit here, do they look any better?