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I like the second edit the most. The lack of color in the first, may as well make a B&W. I also like the mood, the haze, the distant mist and the populated crowded small town.
How ever I do wish I could see more detail in the town. Personally I find it hard to do anything with the sun when it gets to the point it is at. Even an ND grad is going to have a hard time saving detail in the fore ground. Also the sun as is looks ok for a small web image but if you print it large you will basically have a white blob and no detail.
I think it best to wait until the sun is just at the horizon and shooting a very wide shot so you can reduce it's size and it won't dominate so much space. Plus it will help give you more detail where you need it. Nice idea....
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
Thanks for all the pointers. Ill keep them in mind.
Just remember it's my opinion and how I would handle a shot like this. It doesn't mean it's the right way. A big part of learning is to find your style. Not mine. Take what I post with a grain of salt. When posting in critiques you are going to get all kinds of advise. Weed out what you think helps and what you disagree with. Thanks for posting.
I enjoy the shot.
I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..
Don't worry about that. All views/advice is very much appreciated as a am a beginning photographer (i own a camera for exactly 1 year now). Eventho i might not agree with what you are saying i add all the critique i get to my knowledge, expanding the diffirent techniques i can use to take a picture.