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    Loneliest Spring

    While looking for something green, I came across this shot that evokes the way spring is going around here.
    I wish I would have given it just a bit more DOF.
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    Re: Loneliest Spring

    I saw this in the Gallery snoid...I really liked it until my eye was jerked to the top of the picture by the white blob. I think if you just cropped it down to get rid of that I would really like this one.

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    Re: Loneliest Spring

    Thanks for the critique Dana.
    I wasn't sure about that either.
    Overall, I like the balance of this crop, so I cloned it out.
    Is this better to your eye?
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    Re: Loneliest Spring

    Love your take on this one. Very simple and it works. The crop makes it much stronger.
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    Re: Loneliest Spring

    Really cool shot! Love the composition and simplicity. Not sure on the color palette, but it is what it is. Could had a tad more DOF too. Definitely better w/o that white circle up there.

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