Fern House

[NKP68]

This is a fern display hot house at a local arboretum in PA. I was drawn by the shapes and angles.
C&C please.

[arne saknussen]

I like the idea of this shot but it does seem a bit busy. There are a lot of angles and lines and they don't particularly lead us anywhere.

[timwaters77]

I think it needs a focal point. Just too much with nothing real to focus on.

[jetrim]

Agree, my eye bounces all around with nothing to land on. Perhaps a tighter DoF would have helped? Is this Brandywine? (grew up in SE PA and it looks familiar.)

[CaraRose]

Agree with others. See the potential in the lines and shape but just too busy and my eyes can't find a spot to lock on to.

[NKP68]

Thank you all for your comments, I tend to agree.
BTW this is the fern house at The Morris Arboretum on the outskirts of Philly.

Ed