Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 17 of 17

Thread: The Fair

  1. #1
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    The Fair

    Went to the North Georgia State Fair last night. I love long exposures at night...

    1.


    2.


    3.


    4.


    5.


    6.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  2. #2
    Senior Member arne saknussen's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    1,145

    Re: The Fair

    Very nice! It's tough to say which I like the most.
    The first one looks like a giant frisbee and the girl looking at it really adds to the shot.
    But the others are well composed too.

  3. #3
    Senior Member armando_m's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Guadalajara Mexico
    Posts
    4,486

    Re: The Fair

    wow, all are very nice ! perfect exposures and focus

  4. #4
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    Denver Colorado Area
    Posts
    2,242

    Re: The Fair

    Yeah, I think the first is the best composition-wise. Nice shots though.

  5. #5
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Thanks everyone!

    I almost thought of cropping the first one a little tighter. Guess it was a good thing I didn't!
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  6. #6
    n8
    n8 is offline
    Senior Member n8's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    Rockford, Il
    Posts
    1,604

    Re: The Fair

    Did you take a tripod to the fair or do you just have a steady hand?
    mostly Nikon gear

    Feel free to edit my images for critique, just let me know what you did.

  7. #7
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: The Fair

    These are all exposed perfectly with great clarity. My favorite is the first one for the nice dark blue sky gradiant effect. I find that to be the best time for night photography. I can't stand black skies. I also like the composition of the last one where it almost fills the entire frame yet still has room to show the people that are enjoying the fair. I think that one has the best atmosphere here.
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  8. #8
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Quote Originally Posted by n8
    Did you take a tripod to the fair or do you just have a steady hand?
    Tripod. Most of the exposures were between 1-8 sec.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  9. #9
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    These are all exposed perfectly with great clarity. My favorite is the first one for the nice dark blue sky gradiant effect. I find that to be the best time for night photography. I can't stand black skies. I also like the composition of the last one where it almost fills the entire frame yet still has room to show the people that are enjoying the fair. I think that one has the best atmosphere here.
    Thanks! I was trying to get there early enough to get more blue hour pics, as well as some sunset shots since it was such a beautiful night. Unfortunately, traffic and distance messed that up. I may go back Friday night to try again.

    I'm with you on hating black sky, but not much I could do about it this time.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  10. #10
    Senior Shooter Greg McCary's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    Rome Ga.
    Posts
    10,550

    Re: The Fair

    A lot to critique. #1 I wish it were level, wider and the flares were cloned. #2 just leveled. #3 the blurred people bother me. #4 is awesome. #5 get rid of the light on the right and skew it level. Last one , two thumbs up the composition is sweet. Great exposure on them all please share some settings and did you shoot RAW or are all of these "out of camera" as they say? I think the black sky makes the neon pop. I like it. No noise, no issues with that. I am told the best way to deal with Atlanta traffic is to avoid the interstates.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

    Sony a99/a7R

  11. #11
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Quote Originally Posted by Greg McCary
    A lot to critique. #1 I wish it were level, wider and the flares were cloned. #2 just leveled. #3 the blurred people bother me. #4 is awesome. #5 get rid of the light on the right and skew it level. Last one , two thumbs up the composition is sweet. Great exposure on them all please share some settings and did you shoot RAW or are all of these "out of camera" as they say? I think the black sky makes the neon pop. I like it. No noise, no issues with that. I am told the best way to deal with Atlanta traffic is to avoid the interstates.
    Unfortunately, I couldn't go wider on some of the shots. It was a tight fit. The flares in #1 dn't bother me too much, but I may play with it and see. I tried to level it, but since it's a tight shot, the crop would have change a lot.

    I don't have the exposure info here, that'll have to wait until I get home. In general: ISO 100, f11, exposures from 1 to 8 sec. All shot in RAW and PPd in Lightroom 3. Shot on an E-600 with the 11-22mm lens, all at 11mm.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  12. #12
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Quote Originally Posted by Greg McCary
    I am told the best way to deal with Atlanta traffic is to avoid the interstates.
    The interstates weren't the problem this time, it was actually the back roads to get there after I got off the highway. If I go tomorrow night, I'm going to leave MUCH earlier, LOL.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  13. #13
    Senior Member hminx's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    New Zealand
    Posts
    2,154

    Re: The Fair

    Congrats on sticky
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

  14. #14
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Thanks! I was very excited to see that.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  15. #15
    COEXIST DGK*CRONE's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Location
    Santa Ana, Ca
    Posts
    478

    Re: The Fair

    Quote Originally Posted by guzziknight
    Tripod. Most of the exposures were between 1-8 sec.
    with that said, it is interesting to see how still some people are in the pictures.
    Marco Arreguin

    All critique/advice welcome.
    Growing every day.

  16. #16
    Member guzziknight's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Atlanta, GA
    Posts
    110

    Re: The Fair

    Quote Originally Posted by DGK*CRONE
    with that said, it is interesting to see how still some people are in the pictures.
    They were all waiting to get on the ride. I guess they just stood there instead of moving around.
    Olympus E-P1
    Olympus E-PL2
    14-42mm, 11-22mm

    http://guzziknight.smugmug.com/

  17. #17
    GB1
    GB1 is offline
    Moderator GB1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    San Diego CA
    Posts
    9,960

    Re: The Fair

    Very nice. I would up the contrast just a tad on some of them, and perhaps sharpen them just a very small amount. I like your exposure lengths.

    G
    Photography Software and Post Processing Forum Moderator. Visit here!

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Feel free to edit and repost my photos as part of your critique.
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    My Site

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •