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Thread: I shot Shakira

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    I shot Shakira

    naaaaah.... it's just Stacy from Palmdale, CA...

    c & c appreciated.





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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Man, you are good!

    are you shooting these series for the models, to print somewhere, just for you ?

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by armando_m
    Man, you are good!

    are you shooting these series for the models, to print somewhere, just for you ?
    shooting this for their portfolio and mine. Would love to do this and get paid.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Yeah, the skin tones and light in the last one are superb.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Guessing she was easier to work with than Shakira. Just a shot in the dark.

    Critique? Not amateur enough.

    Lighting setup and details would great.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Guessing she was easier to work with than Shakira. Just a shot in the dark.

    Critique? Not amateur enough.

    Lighting setup and details would great.
    hard question... can you narrow it down to which picture? I had 5 strobes out and was moving things around for different looks.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    I shot the sheriff but I did not shoot the deputy...LOL. You certainly should be doing this for cash. Maybe bring out her eyes in the last one.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by Greg McCary
    I shot the sheriff but I did not shoot the deputy...LOL. You certainly should be doing this for cash. Maybe bring out her eyes in the last one.
    thanks.
    yep ... love that song too.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Very nice stuff Phil, you've come quite a long way in a very short time.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by jetrim
    Very nice stuff Phil, you've come quite a long way in a very short time.
    thanks Jet. I love photography so much I dream about it. lol

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Any of them. Or all.

    Your lighting skills are enviable, to say the least.
    Last edited by draymorton; 09-04-2010 at 07:02 AM.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Any of them. Or all.

    Your lighting skills are enviable, to say the least.
    thanks.

    okay.. 3 pic series then.

    keylight: camera right 45 deg up pointing down to her face
    AB1600 - with BD and 30 deg grid
    AB800 hair light - 45 deg pointing UP her back hair
    AB800 kicker camera 10 oclock- on the floor pointing UP on her right side
    Last edited by PhilF; 09-04-2010 at 01:04 PM.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Shakira was in my country a few months ago.... Bad ting bout her was she didnt wear any shoes when she sang...

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by Caitlin
    Shakira was in my country a few months ago.... Bad ting bout her was she didnt wear any shoes when she sang...
    that's hot.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Really amazing. i have no critique here. love the back light that highlights the hair.
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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Phil, all really good shots here, but my fav of the bunch is the last. . .the tight closeup portrait, Great expression and pose, love the backlighting. Small nit would be to see about removing the flat spot on the bridge of her nose in that one. From the angle it looks like its flattened in that small area and would be easy to clone straight. Not a biggie at all, leaving it would be ok.
    she do her own MU? not bad although perhaps a bit heavy on the eye shadow and I would say her left eye could use a bit more blending, which you could do even. small nits really, love the shot. Lots of energy in these, and the tecnicals are all well and good.
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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Well-deserved! You're a pro.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    Phil, all really good shots here, but my fav of the bunch is the last. . .the tight closeup portrait, Great expression and pose, love the backlighting. Small nit would be to see about removing the flat spot on the bridge of her nose in that one. From the angle it looks like its flattened in that small area and would be easy to clone straight. Not a biggie at all, leaving it would be ok.
    she do her own MU? not bad although perhaps a bit heavy on the eye shadow and I would say her left eye could use a bit more blending, which you could do even. small nits really, love the shot. Lots of energy in these, and the tecnicals are all well and good.
    thanks Gary... yes.. I always shoot with a MUA.
    I was having fun moving the lights around.... I was about to get a snoot and just changed my mind. LOL

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Well-deserved! You're a pro.
    lol... no I'm not.

    oh... and I did not include the Madonna pose that I love....here it is.


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    Re: I shot Shakira

    congrats on the sticky !

    the last photo is terrific! I would try to fix an odd reflection on her forehead

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Grats on the stick.

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    congrats on the sticky :-)
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    Re: I shot Shakira

    Quote Originally Posted by PhilF
    lol... no I'm not.
    Maybe not technically...

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    Re: I shot Shakira

    thanks guys.

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