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  1. 08-30-2010, 08:21 AM #1
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    Auntie and Willow

    Trying my hand at portraits. How'd I do on this one? C&C please.
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  2. 08-30-2010, 04:30 PM #2
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    Re: Auntie and Willow

    Nice b&w I think, and while I'm guessing it wasn't planned, I like the shared hand position of the two.
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  3. 08-30-2010, 07:52 PM #3
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    Re: Auntie and Willow

    really nice !

    the girl is ignoring you and the lady is looking at the camera with a subtle smile, it makes it look great , Life magazine style photo

    sorry, I have no suggestions for improvement
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  4. 08-30-2010, 09:11 PM #4
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    Re: Auntie and Willow

    Nope, not planned. Thanks
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  5. 08-30-2010, 09:35 PM #5
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    Re: Auntie and Willow

    Pleasant shot but too little dynamic range I think. Not by much though. Close to great. May be able to amp it in pp.
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  6. 08-30-2010, 09:48 PM #6
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    Re: Auntie and Willow

    Thanks, I'll give it a try.
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  7. 08-31-2010, 07:07 AM #7
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    Re: Auntie and Willow

    The woman's wrist seems to be at an odd angle to me. It's almost like it's separate from her.
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