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    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
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    evening architecture

    Nothing special, just modern glass-and-steel offices.
    But do the evening light and the sky make up for it?

    BTW the E-P1 in "P" mode does a good job, I think.
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    Re: evening architecture

    Beautiful stuff Wombat! Love the gradients, so I guess the answer is *yes*. I'd be tempted to clean up the distractions at the lower left and pinch the bottom in to get the light poles and dark building section straight up and down (remove the perspective distortion) but these are really very minor nit-picky issues.

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    Re: evening architecture

    Nice use of lines. I agree w/ Jetrim that you might crop the bottom a bit and slightly straighten those poles. I might also consider darkening the sky a little, but that is no biggie. Well seen!

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    Re: evening architecture

    I like it.

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    Re: evening architecture

    I like it Paul but agree it could use skewed. Straighten the right side and poles on the left. The composition is very good.
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    Re: evening architecture

    Thanks everyone!
    It was one of those moments as I walked round the corner, I just became aware of the photo and had a feeling it was right (and right, now) to take it.
    I have an opportunity to try out the new LR distortion correction options
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    Re: evening architecture

    I particularly like the way the shadow of the staircase creates an illusion.

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