Today

[Griever]

So today I went out and just had some fun roaming around so cal. Here are 3 shots I took during my adventures. Let me know what you think.

[hminx]

Would love to see the rest of the aircraft, two WW2 bomber shots and a squirrel sort of make it hard to critique :-
#1 Odd angle and seems to miss the interesting bits
#2 Much better but I would like to see more detail in those big radial engines.
#3 Squirrel seems a bit soft

[Griever]

Hah, yah like my day my choice of photos was pretty random. Any random day outside of the meat grinder of a job I work in is a good one. As for the rest of the plane I will see what I can get. It is actually a restoration project and everything is a mess and tightly fenced in so trying to line up even that shot was hard.

[GB1]

Nice day too shoot. I like the squirrel the best though as Pete mentioned it's a bit soft. To get really nice shots of the planes, it will take more isolating your subject, which here means eliminating the background objects that don't add to the shot, e.g. the hanger, the poles, etc. THey are sharp and clear, just need to consider what's happening everywhere in the scene and start eliminating.

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[saif aldamen]

#1 i would like you to focus more on th US flag

the pic, ID some how hidden

#2 good i like aircrafts , but it well be better if you set position to WIDE ANGLE

# 3 nice shoot ,, there are much better location to make this pic better

thank you