Day out with a Volunteer

[Tyson L. Sparks]

This young lady is a volunteer firefighter/emt with the same fire company as mine. I got her to model for me so I could use my D50 and E510 to compare some shots. I used a few lens's from my brother as I don't have any of my own yet. All in all Iam happy with the results, i need to learn to pose people better. What do you guys think.

[Bakerman35]

Tyson, I think you did a good job with these. They are all great shots. I do think the second would work better if she were barefoot. And I am not sure about the first shot....I just have a problem with being in the middle of the road. The last shot would be more pleasing to my eye if you lost the sticks in the foreground.

[Greg McCary]

Nice shots Tyson what does the volunteer think of them? Are these straight out of the camera?

[Tyson L. Sparks]

I have not gotten any feedback from my model yet, but I am sure she likes them. At least you two guys like them. Thanks for the comments.

[Tyson L. Sparks]

85 views and only 2 comments, man these must be some bad images????

[pisco]

they are good.
3 & 4 are a little green maybe? - some wb adjustment needed

[raiundazan]

i think they are fantastic

[reidsprincess20028]

Great Shots!

[WesternGuy]

Tyson, overall great images, very pretty model. My only nitpicks are in the first one, where her foot seems to grow out of her head - my eyes go from the yellow lines to her hands to her face and then to the foot, which I then find a bit distracting. As well, the sticks/branches in the bottom part of the last one detract from the image a bit - they tend to take your eyes away from the model. In the fourth one, the wisps of hair in her face are also a bit distracting. My 0.02¢.

I would really like to know what your model thinks of them...

Cheers,

WesternGuy

[Tyson L. Sparks]

Well she liked them, not the ones I liked but thats ok. Thank for the input that is what is was looking for.