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    abandon school shoot

    I took two of my models out to an abandon school.
    Here is what I got.
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    Re: abandon school shoot

    You did well with the doorways, the back lit one is excellent. You might ask the woman to bend a knee for a more shapely leg look.

    The hands in the pocket look with the model make her stomach look large (a 45 degree sideway pose would take care of that) and I am not sure about the dark glasses.

    Seems like there are some photo opportunities with the tattoos and graffiti.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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