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    Saw this wall while out walking the dog with my daughter. Had to return to shoot it.

    Is there enough here?
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    Re: Covered

    I like it. I'm wondering though if it might be stronger cropped in slightly towards the thick vines at the bottom right.
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    Re: Covered

    Thank you, Cara.

    Will keep your crop suggestion in mind. I'll keep my eye on this wall as the vines start to leaf out. Thanks again.
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    Re: Covered

    Loupey,

    It's a nice image. Having said that, I think if there were a leaf, small group of leaves or flower(s) or a bird - something in one of the corners - that would give it a bit more character. I think that would make it more interesting. However, that's subjective - I like the "design" the branches have made.

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    Re: Covered

    I love this shot. I love the darker area of the brick wall. I wonder if making the rest of the brick a bit more vibrant would work. Great job!

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    Liz - I thank you for your observation. I agree that some amount of leaves (or something else) would definitely change the character of the shot. I'm very eager to return to the spot and see how it is developing.

    yetishot - thank you. I will play around with some different processing methods to see how the shot can be improved. Thanks again.
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